3rd Quarter Submission

The first revision we made was adding another part of the opening sequence that tells us exactly where we are, which is the Ferguson and Bracewell detective office. We added this into make sure the audience knew what the character’s careers were and how it related to the criminal case. It also paves the way for more scenes of the characters doing detective worker tasks, so it just makes the rest of the movie overall more clear.

Another revision we made to the movie was a transitional slide after the conversation with the two detectives. We had this in to make it more clear with the detective goes after work. Which is back to his home office to work on the case. This transition provides extra clarity and make sure the audience does not get confused about the direction of the plot.

The final revision we made for our third-quarter submission was adding a small phrase “or you will be taken” after it says “watch your back”. This change doesn’t necessarily do anything to the plot, but it adds a sort of catchphrase along with watch your back that could possibly make our film more marketable to a wider variety of audiences.

https://youtu.be/YV9QJM9PnbE

Revision #3

The final revision we made for our third-quarter submission was adding a small phrase “or you will be taken” after it says “watch your back”. This change doesn’t necessarily do anything to the plot, but it adds a sort of catchphrase along with watch your back that could possibly make our film more marketable to a wider variety of audiences.

Revision #2

Another revision we made to the movie was a transitional slide after the conversation with the two detectives. We had this in to make it more clear with the detective goes after work. Which is back to his home office to work on the case. This transition provides extra clarity and make sure the audience does not get confused about the direction of the plot.

Revision #1

The first revision we made was adding another part of the opening sequence that tells us exactly where we are, which is the Ferguson and Bracewell detective office. We added this into make sure the audience knew what the character’s careers were and how it related to the criminal case. It also paves the way for more scenes of the characters doing detective worker tasks, so it just makes the rest of the movie overall more clear.